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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the percentage of regional household recycling rates per person in three countries (the United
Kingdom
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,
France
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, and Germany) over 10 years from 2005 to 2015.
Overall
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, the average household recycling rates in the United
Kingdom
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 and Germany increased over the period given,
while
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 in
France
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, it decreased.
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, from 2005,
France
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 had the highest
recyling
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recycling
 rates but from 2009-2015, it was replaced by the United
Kingdom
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. With regards to
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the recyling
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recyling
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recycling
 rate in the United
Kingdom
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, it began at around 30% the first year and
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 it went up to around 55 in 2011 and eventually
reaching
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 approximately 60% in the final year.
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, in the case of Germany, the recycling rate was 20% in 2005, and it rose gradually, reaching almost 55%
in
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at
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 the end of the period.
On the other hand
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, the household recycling rate in
France
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 decreased by roughly half in 2005, and it fell to 30% in 2013, after which it climbed to the previous year.
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