In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problem for governments. Other people think that there are benefits if society has more elderly population. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

In a lot of nations nowadays, it is the case that

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die later than has ever been the case before. On the one hand, some

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may feel

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has propagated issues for the

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, some

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argue that there are clear advantages with a high prevalence of elderly

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in the population. In

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essay, I will argue that the declining youth population has mostly created devastating economic consequences for the

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, as

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forces them to

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their expenditure on public services. Having an increasingly ageing demographic will likely

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the demand for public necessities

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healthcare, retirement homes and pensions.

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, it is almost certain that the

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will have to

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drastically the spending budget it allocates to

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spending to match the rise in consumption. Whilst

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may benefit

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society for the greater good as it's likely to

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the quality of the services,

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will likely mean that those spent funds could have likely been spent

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more productively.

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necessities being essential pillars to the

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of society, I believe that governments

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the rising ageing populations may feel pressured into not spending it anywhere else, and given that the elderly are economically inactive,

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will not likely

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the economy's productivity and

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could have the adverse effect of increasing taxes in the nation to cover the loss.

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topic in my Sociology lessons, I have found out the devastating

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impact which a high proportion of older

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has on

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of Japan and Singapore. Before becoming dominated

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the elderly, these countries were far more productive economically and had lower tax rates which has allowed them to grow economically.

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, the increasing life expectancy has devastating implications for the

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as it puts

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on their resources, and reduces their ability to spend

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, one of the main arguments in favour of an elderly demographic is that retired

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can take care of

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in dual-career couples.

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couples will likely simply not have time to provide for their

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, as both of the parents will be working. In that

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their parents, who will not be working, may take the role of child carers and

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will allow the governance to maintain its workforce size.

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,

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may have wider benefits for family dynamics. One reason for

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is that

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are more likely to be able to spend more time with their grandparents which will allow for family bonding. Given the generational gap which is growing between the youth and the elderly,

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could be an effective solution to ensure there is a close relationship

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children

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with their older family members.

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, back when I was a toddler, my grandmother and my grandparents used to look after me and my other siblings.

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,

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provides a foundation for families in the long term as it involves several stakeholders within a family environment and will mean that the economy is more likely to be productive, which can benefit the

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massively. In conclusion, it is true that an increasing percentage of older

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can help families where parents may require assistance as they can seek out

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after their

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, on the whole, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the disadvantages as the governing bodies will experience an increasing need to fund common services, which has a clear opportunity cost.