The charts below show the main methods of transportation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009.

The charts below show the main methods of transportation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009.
A glance at the pie charts compares the most important means of transportation for going to a
university
in 2004 and 2009.
Overall
, more than half of commuters to the
university
used a car in 2004,
while
the prevalent way for arriving at the
university
was the bus in 2009.
Furthermore
, the train was the least popular mode of transport to the
university
among students and staff in both years. In 2004, the car was the most popular method of transport with 51%,
whereas
33% of people preferred using the bus. Bicycles were responsible for 9% of transportation to the
university
, compared to 7% of using walking and train. Five years later, the share of buses in commuting people to
university
showed a significant increase to 46%, as compared to the dramatic decrease of cars to less than 30% in the same period. The proportion of using bicycles went up to 16%, 7% more than that in 2004.
Likewise
, the proportion of using the train and walking rose less dramatically than the bus and bicycle to 4% and 6% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words university with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Public transportation
  • Private vehicles
  • Sustainable transportation
  • Environmental impact
  • Commute
  • Utility
  • Infrastructure
  • Accessibility
  • Congestion
  • Carbon footprint
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