The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008 The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008 The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
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The
two
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diagrams below depict information on the activities of UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not have a full-time job after graduating from college in 2008.
Overall
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, most students of both
groups
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have chosen
further
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study
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,
while
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voluntary
work
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and
unemployment
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of
graduates
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were approximately at the same level as
postgraduates
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.
However
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, the number of
graduates
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who had part-time
work
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was significantly lower than that of the other group. A common trend amongst
two
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groups
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of students was their choice of
further
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study
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, voluntary
work
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, and
unemployment
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. As with both
graduates
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and
postgraduates
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, the majority chose to continue their education.
Similarly
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,
unemployment
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in both
groups
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was equal to half the size of those who decided on
further
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study
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. Voluntary
work
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amongst
graduates
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and
postgraduates
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was incredibly low compared to other selectives.
However
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,
according to
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the
two
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charts, the section for part-time jobs is noticeably different between the
two
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groups
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.
Whereas
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the number of
graduates
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with part-time jobs is nearly at the same level as
unemployment
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, the level of
postgraduates
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who have made
this
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choice reaches roughly the rate of
further
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study
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selection.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further, however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, groups, study, work, unemployment, graduates, postgraduates with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Graduate
  • Postgraduate
  • Full-time work
  • Further education
  • Part-time work
  • Unemployment
  • Volunteering
  • Traveling
  • Gap year
  • Career progression
  • Job market
  • Transition
  • Academic life
  • Professional sphere
  • Economic factors
  • Social factors
  • Financial crisis
  • Long-term impact
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