The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008 The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
The
two
diagrams below depict information on the activities of UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not have a full-time job after graduating from college in 2008.
Overall
, most students of both groups
have chosen further
study
, while
voluntary work
and unemployment
of graduates
were approximately at the same level as postgraduates
. However
, the number of graduates
who had part-time work
was significantly lower than that of the other group.
A common trend amongst two
groups
of students was their choice of further
study
, voluntary work
, and unemployment
. As with both graduates
and postgraduates
, the majority chose to continue their education. Similarly
, unemployment
in both groups
was equal to half the size of those who decided on further
study
. Voluntary work
amongst graduates
and postgraduates
was incredibly low compared to other selectives.
However
, according to
the two
charts, the section for part-time jobs is noticeably different between the two
groups
. Whereas
the number of graduates
with part-time jobs is nearly at the same level as unemployment
, the level of postgraduates
who have made this
choice reaches roughly the rate of further
study
selection.Submitted by katenok200312 on
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