The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today.

The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today.
The provided maps depict how the
town
centre
’s layout has changed from 1990 to the present. Looking at an
overall
perspective, it can be seen that several places have become real estate industries.
In addition
, the
town
centre
’s streets have additional pedestrian walkways.
To begin
with, the upper area of the
town
centre
in 1990 had four private houses with a cafe and a childcare
centre
side by side.
In addition
, there was a
bank
in the top right corner. In the present, places have been reconstructed into a shopping mall leaving the childcare development
centre
and the
bank
. Moving on to the middle area of the
town
centre
, in 1990, there was a library sandwiched by
park
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and
town
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a town
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hall which was surrounded by four streets for vehicles including Nowtoon, Smith, Green and
oxford street
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Oxford Street
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.
Additionally
, there was a
bank
in the middle right corner. Currently, the places have remained the same,
however
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the
bank
was substituted for a cafe. Meanwhile, streets have been renovated into crosswalk signs for people to walk.
Finally
, the bottom area of the
town
centre
in 1990 had seven houses and one house in the bottom right corner. Nowadays, all houses have been changed into Apartment blocks.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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