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The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today.

The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today.
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The provided maps depict how the
town
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centre
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’s layout has changed from 1990 to the present. Looking at an
overall
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 perspective, it can be seen that several places have become real estate industries.
In addition
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, the
town
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centre
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’s streets have additional pedestrian walkways.
To begin
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 with, the upper area of the
town
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centre
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 in 1990 had four private houses with a cafe and a childcare
centre
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 side by side.
In addition
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, there was a
bank
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 in the top right corner. In the present, places have been reconstructed into a shopping mall leaving the childcare development
centre
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 and the
bank
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. Moving on to the middle area of the
town
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centre
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, in 1990, there was a library sandwiched by
park
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a park
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 and
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town
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a town
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 hall which was surrounded by four streets for vehicles including Nowtoon, Smith, Green and
oxford street
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Oxford Street
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.
Additionally
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, there was a
bank
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 in the middle right corner. Currently, the places have remained the same,
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however
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however,
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 the
bank
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 was substituted for a cafe. Meanwhile, streets have been renovated into crosswalk signs for people to walk.
Finally
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, the bottom area of the
town
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centre
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 in 1990 had seven houses and one house in the bottom right corner. Nowadays, all houses have been changed into Apartment blocks.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, centre, bank with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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