the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart demonstrates what the weekly salaries of families in an unknown country were spent
on
in the years 1968 and 2018.
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apply
Overall
, most of
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apply
people
Change noun form
people's
expences
went to eating in 1968 and leisure activities in 2018. Correct your spelling
expenses
However
, the minimum of their spendings
were related to fuel and power in both years of the survey.
In 1968, people tended to spend over one-third of their money when it came to food, Fix the agreement mistake
spending
while
the money spent on housing and clothing were
relatively lower and equally at 10 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
percent
of their income. Change the spelling
per cent
Moreover
, their third most popular way of spending was related to household and personal goods and transport which leaves around 5 percent
of their salary Change the spelling
per cent
that is
contributed to fuel and power.
On the other hand
, leisure purposes were the most expensive traits in 2018 which used up around 22 percent
of their income. On the contrary
, by 2018, only around 15 percent
of people's money was spent on food which is even a lower proportion than housing at merely below 20 percent
. While
transport contributes to around 15 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
these
spending, household items and clothing materials stand at 7 and 5 Correct determiner usage
this
percent
respectively. Similar to 1968, power is the Change the spelling
per cent
last
priority when spending which is accompanied by personal goods in 2018.Submitted by bita.rezaei7052 on
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