The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006.
The given table develops some information about the international market in mobile production in two years that`s 2005 and 2006. The biggest amount in both of these years was Nokia with 32.5
percent
in 2005 and 35 percent
in 2006.
The number
of worldwide mobile phone sale
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sales
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Nokia company with less than one quarter was the hugest Change preposition
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number
in 2005 after that Motorola by 17.7 percent
was the second biggest among Change the spelling
per cent
However
the other companies were more than Motoral by almost fewer than 20 per cent. although
Samsung sold more than 12% which can be in the bigger groups. Sony Ericsson and L.G amounts were in
the same level Change preposition
at
also
the littlest number
was for BenQ mobile with less than 5%.
The amounts of sales in both of two company which are Nokia and Motorola increased followed
by 35% and almost 21% in 2006, but the Verb problem
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number
of Samsung company sales decreased to 11.8 percent
. Also
, Sony Ericsson and L.G
declined followed by 7.4% and 6.3% and, BenQ Mobiles Correct your spelling
LG
sale
dived by more than 2 per cent. The other companies Fix the agreement mistake
sales
also
slid by 16.25.Submitted by TUTOO on
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