The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The given line
grapoh
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graph
ilustrate
how many Correct your spelling
illustrates
number
of tourist Change to a plural noun
numbers
visted
a particular Correct your spelling
visited
island
in the year
between 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the total number of visitors
where visiting the caribbean
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Caribbean
island
was more then
1 Replace the word
than
million
in
every Change preposition
apply
year
. The visitors
satying
on Correct your spelling
sitting
cruise
ships was
rough;y more than Correct subject-verb agreement
were
the
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those
staysing
on Correct your spelling
staying
island
in 2016 and 2017.
The Add an article
an island
the island
visitors
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number of visitors
stayed
on Wrong verb form
staying
cruise
ship
was less than 0.5 Fix the agreement mistake
ships
million
in 2010 and it starts fluctuated until 2013. After 2014, it started increasing to 1million
and it Correct your spelling
1 million
stayed
Verb problem
continued
growth
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growing
as
0.3 Change preposition
to
million
in
every Change preposition
apply
year
from 2014 to 2016. In 2017, it reached 2 milliom
who Correct your spelling
million
interested
to Add a missing verb
were interested
saty
in Correct your spelling
stay
cruise
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a cruise
the cruise
ship
. Fix the agreement mistake
ships
Initally
, the Correct your spelling
Initially
vistors
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visitors
were
showed high interest in staying on Unnecessary verb
apply
island
with 0.8 Add an article
the island
an island
million
in both year
2010 and 2011. Fix the agreement mistake
years
then
it started highly increasing to 1.5 milli9on
in 2013 and it stayed Correct your spelling
million
plateau
until 2015. after 2015, it again Wrong verb form
plateaued
fluctuates
and Wrong verb form
fluctuated
visitors
staying on island
were less than Add an article
the island
staying
on Correct pronoun usage
those staying
cruise
ships.
In total, people were
Unnecessary verb
apply
visted
more than 1 Correct your spelling
visited
million
in every year
. Initially
, it was 1 million
and it skyrocked
until 2015 and stayed Correct your spelling
skyrocketed
skyrocket
plateau
for one Wrong verb form
plateaued
year
and
again it started increasing to 3.5 Correct word choice
apply
million
in year
2017.Change the article
the year
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, year, visitors, million, cruise with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "plateau" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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