The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. summarize the information and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

summarize the information and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates how often
people
in the USA use fast
food
for their meals in three years: 2003, 2006 and 2013. The biggest amount in these three years
were
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once a week and once or twice a month. The number of
people
who were eating fast
food
once a week and
also
once or twice a month in 2003 was almost 31% but
this
group in 2006 increased by approximately 33% and decreased by 27% in 2013. The other group which is once or twice a month were so close to the
last
one, in 2003 they were 30%
then
they divided by 25% in 2006, after that
this
group sharped by close to 35%. The number of
people
who ate fast
food
every day and never in these three years was less than 5 per cent.
However
, the others that ate several times a week was less than 15% in 2003 and 2013;
although
, these persons surged to 20 per cent in 2006. The range of
people
that were eating a few times a year was
also
15% in 2006 and 2013 but they were fewer than 15% in 2003. All in all the number of
people
, was never ate fast
food
and ate every day was on the same level but
also
they were so less.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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