The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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bar chart illustrates the ability of literacy in different regions and both genders in the
last
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year
Overall
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, it can be seen that all regions had more illiterate
females
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than
males
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.
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,
while
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the
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rates
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in developed
countries
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were the
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, South Asia had the most illiterate people all over the world. Looking to the
countries
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where the
illiteracy
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was the least. In terms of developed
countries
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, both
males
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and
females
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comprised around 2% of
illiteracy
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rates
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. In the meantime, the
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rate was more than 20% for each gender in the Caribbean.
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, even though
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accounted for exactly 20% of
illiteracy
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in Oceania, illiterate
males
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made up approximately 8%. With regards to the remaining
countries
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in which the
illiteracy
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was the most. As for Arab States
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South Asia, both of them comprised more than half of
illiteracy
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rates
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in
females
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. Meanwhile, only a third of them who could not read and write were male. Moving on to Africa, the
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rates
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in
females
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more terrible than
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males
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with about 48% and more than 30%, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words females, males, illiteracy, rates, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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