The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps illustrate the main changes in the school premises of Lynwich College in 2006 and today.

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, new infrastructures have been built inside the area to provide a better studying environment for students. Other than that, a centralized road network provides ease of access to the various buildings which was lacking in the past. Looking into details, a new bus stop has been constructed adjacent to the main road which occupies some land space of the school. The car park has been redesigned in

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a way that some areas have been allocated for bikes.

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, a centralized cafeteria is standing to serve all the people inside to buy their necessities. It is interesting to note that,

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college buildings 1 and 2 are still there, a few trees in the southwest area of the land have been cut in order to shift the library to provide access from both of the school buildings.

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, now there is a sports centre erected in the northern part of the field, in between the playground and the carpark to facilitate more pupils to engage in sports activities.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

187 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

underwent significant changes
consisted of
large open space
utilized
relocated
limited facilities and amenities
wider range of facilities and amenities

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