The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart displays the changes in
production
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the production
a production
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rate of Petroleum, Coal and Natural gas in
United
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the United
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Kingdom over a nearly
two decade
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two-decade
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period between 1981 and 2000.
Overall
, Patrelum was the most common fuel type by far at any
time
in the given period.
Whereas
, coal was the second most produced source of energy
before
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just after 1991 when Natural gas leapfrogged coal in terms of the level of
production
.
Patrelium
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Petroleum
production
rate soared until about 1984, with
approxiamately
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approximately
50
units
increase which led to 140 energy
units
.
Then
, it
plateaud
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plateaued
plateau
plateaus
for some
time
and decreased at a constant rate by about 1990, after which
plateaud
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plateaued
plateau
plateaus
again for some
time
.
Moreover
, it increased through the remaining
time
and finished with 140
units
. Coal
production
which started with 80
units
dipped in near 1984. Afterwards, it remained pretty much flat and ended up between 20-40
units
.
While
Natural gas
production
level which started
with
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at
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just under 40
percent
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per cent
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remained still until
near
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nearly
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1990.
However
, it kept going up and up until the very end with about 80
units
.
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  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
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