The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart displays the changes in

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production

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the production

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rate of Petroleum, Coal and Natural gas in

United

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Kingdom over a nearly

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period between 1981 and 2000.

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, Patrelum was the most common fuel type by far at any

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in the given period.

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, coal was the second most produced source of energy

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just after 1991 when Natural gas leapfrogged coal in terms of the level of

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Patrelium

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Petroleum

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rate soared until about 1984, with

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approximately

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increase which led to 140 energy

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, it

plateaud

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plateaued

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for some

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and decreased at a constant rate by about 1990, after which

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plateaued

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again for some

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, it increased through the remaining

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and finished with 140

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. Coal

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which started with 80

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dipped in near 1984. Afterwards, it remained pretty much flat and ended up between 20-40

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Natural gas

production

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level which started

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just under 40

percent

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remained still until

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1990.

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, it kept going up and up until the very end with about 80

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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Today there are many people who are overweight. Give reasons for this and give solutions to fix the problem.

In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People's shopping habit depends more on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for spots or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.