The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart displays the changes in

production

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the production

a production

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rate of Petroleum, Coal and Natural gas in

United

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the United

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Kingdom over a nearly

two decade

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two-decade

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period between 1981 and 2000.

Overall

, Patrelum was the most common fuel type by far at any

time

in the given period.

Whereas

, coal was the second most produced source of energy

before

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apply

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just after 1991 when Natural gas leapfrogged coal in terms of the level of

production

Patrelium

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Petroleum

production

rate soared until about 1984, with

approxiamately

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approximately

units

increase which led to 140 energy

units

Then

, it

plateaud

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plateaued

plateau

plateaus

for some

time

and decreased at a constant rate by about 1990, after which

plateaud

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plateaued

plateau

plateaus

again for some

time

Moreover

, it increased through the remaining

time

and finished with 140

units

. Coal

production

which started with 80

units

dipped in near 1984. Afterwards, it remained pretty much flat and ended up between 20-40

units

While

Natural gas

production

level which started

with

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just under 40

percent

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per cent

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remained still until

near

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nearly

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1990.

However

, it kept going up and up until the very end with about 80

units

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