The graph below show the number of hours spent on social media per day from 2010to 2016 as well as the reasons why they used them. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting.
The chart gives information about the total of hours that people spend on social media every day
in
during Change preposition
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of
the period between 2010 to 2016.
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Overall
, the graph illustrated three different type
small Change to a plural noun
types
business
, medium business
and the last
one large business
when
happened Correct word choice
which
that
in the years 2010 and 2016.
Now, turning to the details, in 2016 the Correct word choice
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rate's
small Change preposition
rate of
business
was the higher trend to reached
approximately 50 per cent Verb problem
reaching
while
in 2012 was the lower number it
Correct pronoun usage
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was
Verb problem
reaching
nuder
30 %.
In 2016 The Correct word choice
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figures's
medium Change preposition
figures for
business
increased slightly to reach above 50 percentage
Replace the word
per cent
whereas
, the rate in the year 2015 and in the year 2012 are reach
Wrong verb form
reached
to
30 Change preposition
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percentage
respectively. Replace the word
per cent
However
in Correct article usage
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the
large Correct article usage
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business
between 2012 and 2013 they made up Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
same
levelChange the article
the same
Add the comma(s)
, in addition,
in addition
the highest number Change preposition
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of
spent on social media was in 2016 Change preposition
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Verb problem
reaching
to reach
nearly Change the verb form
reaching
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to
80 proportion.Change preposition
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Vocabulary: Replace the words business with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
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