The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is a diagram depicting the process of
electricity
being generated from coal. Clearly,
this
is a complex process that requires a range of equipment and facilities. There are two main steps including
gas
generating and
electricity
production.
Firstly
, there is a preliminary step, in which the coal is being mined before crushed into smaller materials by some unique machines.
Then
follows the
gas
-generated
stage
after the coal is transported to the gasifier by trucks. In
this
stage
, coal is heated and generates
gas
.
Therefore
, there is a cooling
stage
to cool down the temperature of the
gas
, which
also
emits waste heat in
this
process. In the
electricity
generating
stage
, the
gas
firstly
is cleaned before being transferred to the power plant. After the cleaning step, the
electricity
was produced from
gas
. The
stage
of power production
also
makes waste heat during the period. In the end, the
electricity
was delivered to residential areas and other manufactural facilities.
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