The diagram shows how apple is canned.

This

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picture illustrates the different steps used to manufacture conserved

apple

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apples

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.

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, there is an apple which is

vital

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ingredient, more than ten stages in the fruit conserving procedure, beginning with the

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apples

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transportation and ending with packaging them into

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apply

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the

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apply

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jars. Looking

of

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the first stages of the process, we can see how

human

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a human

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has to

be picked

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apple

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an apple

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and has to be transported by truck. After that, products have to be washed

by

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with

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water and checked thoroughly

quality

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for quality

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.

Then

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send to cold storing equipment and weighing.

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apples

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have to be pilled and corned. In the next stages, fruits canned and sealed in

jar

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a jar

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Besides

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,

canned

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the canned

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jar has to be sealed. Jars of canned

apples

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have to be boiled and properly sterilized

then

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, it

labeled

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. In the second the

last

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stage, it has to

be send

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in storage for some days.

Finally

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, conserved

apples

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packed

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are packed

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in boxes for delivery for sale.