You have been invited to attend an interview for a place on a course of study at a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot go to the interview at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor. In your letter explain why you cannot keep the appointment apologise and offer to arrange a new appointment ask how long the interview will be, and whether there will be any tests during it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Sarah. I am writing

this

letter to

apologies

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because of

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for

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my absence

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from

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the

interview

which was scheduled

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for

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apply

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March and to arrange a new

appoiment

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appointment

Firstly

, I would like to let you know the

reson

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reason

for my absence. I had a doctor's

appoinment

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appointment

scheduled before 2 hours of our

interview

. I went an hour early to that

appoinment

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appointment

so that I

can

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be on time

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for

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our meeting. Unfortunately, the doctor had met with an accident and came to the hospital after a couple of hours. I have planned to call off my doctor's

appoinment

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appointment

at that time but I am unable to do so. I am really sorry about

this

situation. I would be delighted if you

reshedule

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reschedule

our meeting. I am flexible so

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will be able to attend the meeting any time, which will be the best fit for you. I assure

that

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you that

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I will not let

this

situation happen again.

Additionally

, I would like to know about the duration of an

interview

so I can prepare in advance. I have seen in your mail that

this

meeting will be with your manager and not the technical round. But wanted to confirm whether there will be any assessment during the

interview

. Can please let me know these details

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Your's

faithfully

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, Sarah.

Submitted by r.harip3 on Wed May 15 2024

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task achievement

Consider carefully checking your spelling and grammar before submitting. For example, 'appoiment' should be 'appointment', and 'reshedule' should be 'reschedule'.

coherence and cohesion

Enhance the logical connections between your paragraphs. For example, you can use transition words to clearly show the relationship between your missed appointment and your request for rescheduling.

task achievement

Your tone is appropriate and respectful, which suits the formal context.

coherence and cohesion

Clear separation of different points in your letter, making it easy to follow your arguments.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

223 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

regrettably
previous engagement
commitment
unavoidable
sincere apology
reschedule
accommodate
flexibility
adequate preparation
assessment
inconvenience
availability
alternative appointment
invitation
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