The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph demonstrates how many
shops
have closed and opened their business in an unknown country between the years of 2011 to 2018.
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Overall
, the number of Linking Words
shops
that closed in Use synonyms
this
7-year timespan has fallen drastically. Linking Words
On the contrary
, in the case of the openings, the Linking Words
numbers
stayed moderately the same despite all the fluctuations experienced throughout the survey period.
In 2011, around 8500 Use synonyms
shops
had concluded their businesses which remains the highest record of closure in Use synonyms
this
7-year period which was followed by a dramatic fall into 4000 Linking Words
shops
after only one year. Afterwards, the Use synonyms
numbers
soared to over 6000 in 2014 which fell right back to 4000 by 2015. These closure schemes levelled out temporarily from 2015 to a year after which was immediately followed by a slight Use synonyms
raise
in Correct your spelling
rise
numbers
. These closures reached the bottom in 2018 with only 3000 being closed.
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On the other hand
, with the starting point of 6500, opening Linking Words
numbers
had minor fluctuations from 2011 to 2014 which Use synonyms
then
experienced a major downfall from 6500 to just a little above zero from 2014 to 2015. Linking Words
However
, openings started to increase by approximately 4500 in number by 2016, leaving it at 5000 opened Linking Words
shops
. Right Use synonyms
after
Linking Words
this
increase, Linking Words
numbers
slightly plateaued from 2016 until the end of the survey.Use synonyms
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