Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In today’s era, there is an increase in the amount of community who require benefits immediately.
This
is because nation
often don't want to wait and only think about themselves. Fix the agreement mistake
nations
This
writer believes that this
is a negative development and will explain why during the essay.
It must be understood that family
are not into waiting for Fix the agreement mistake
families
stuff
. To be more specific, community
do not want to waste generation waiting, Correct article usage
the community
instead
, they consider doing other activities and jobs. Hence
, they want results instantly for everything they do. For example
, society
of China Correct article usage
the society
are
creating new technologies for everything to be done as soon as possible as they do not want to spend more Change the verb form
is
generation
on menial tasks.
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generations
However
, wanting stuff
instantly has a negative impact on public’s
attitudes. Correct article usage
the public’s
In other words
, thinking too much about yourself is a sign of selfishness. This
can lead to many bad consequences in life. Furthermore
, these days, public
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the public
depend
on technologies for various Correct subject-verb agreement
depends
stuff
, such
as installing inverters in their homes so that they can use electricity in case of power cuts as they only have a little patience to wait for power to come. For example
, according to
a survey in North America, it has been reported that 70% of crowd
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the crowd
have
become more impatient than earlier as they do not want to waste space on anything.
In conclusion, currently, a lot of Correct subject-verb agreement
has
nation
ask for benefits and services immediately Fix the agreement mistake
nations
due to
attitude and year. However
, it leads to bad stuff
and humans need to change.Submitted by [email protected] on
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You have addressed both parts of the task: reasons for instant gratification and its impact.
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