The charts below give information on average life expectancy in four countries, from 1993 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on average life expectancy in four countries, from 1993 to 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart and table below illustrate details of the
life
span in
Japan
, Korea, the US and
Indonesia
between 1993 and 2008. From an observational perspective, it can be seen that
Japan
occupied the oldest age compared with the others,
whereas
the Indonesians increased their
life
expectancy which was in the top spot.
Additionally
,
Indonesia
saw a predominantly high longevity, it was the youngest age-related residence in the chart. Looking at the figure in
further
detail,
Japan
had an average age of above 80, which was more than 2 years old in Korea. In terms of the US and
Indonesia
, the ages ranged from 70.9 to 77.2, with the greater
life
span the Americans. Turning to the remaining statistics in the table,
Indonesia
accounted for a 14.1-year increase in the
life
span, followed by the Koreans who had an extended longevity of 9.3. With regards to
Japan
, the lesser increase in age range was witnessed by the increase to 5.1 years
while
the US was half of that.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.

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  • life expectancy
  • trends
  • increase/decrease
  • significant
  • improvements
  • economic factors
  • lifestyle changes
  • healthcare
  • average
  • convergence
  • divergence
  • overall trend
  • future patterns
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