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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given diagram represents the amount of commodities carried by different types of transport in the period of time from 1074 to 2002 in the UK. In general, what stands out from the graph is that they were increasing except for the Rail method which was stable as a whole. As regards the Road method that carried out by vehicles, the amount of load is about 70
million
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tones
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 it was fluctuation over the next twelve
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, at which
point
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 it went up to just under 80
million
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tones
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, having remained stable at
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 rate,
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 jumped up to over 90
million
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tones
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 which was top of the list. Another interesting
point
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 is that transfer whereby water modes started from just under 40
million
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tones
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 increased significantly to just under 60, next it remained stable over the 8
years
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, at
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, it dropped to approximately fifty
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tonnes
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 it shoots up to about 65
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tonnes
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 which were not quite as popular as Road modes in 1974. If we look at the Pipeline, it began with about 5
million
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tonnes
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 which was the bottom of the list,
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 it considerably rose to over 20
million
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tonnes
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 in the next eight
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. At
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point
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, having remained stable from 1982 until 1990, next it plunged at 20
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tonnes
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 from 1990 to 1994, next it remained stable in the 8
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 which in 2002 was 20
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tonnes
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 which were nowhere near as popular as the Railway.
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, the Rail method,
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 as the train, did not increase, whilst having remained stable at 40
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tonnes
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 from 1974 until 1978,
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 it fluctuated until 2002.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tones, years, point, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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