The maps below show the city layout of Brisbane between 1975 and the current day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps compare the patterns of Kimsville town from 2002 and now.

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, it is observed that throughout the period the area experienced unsignificant changes.

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, it became more residential

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cleared trees and the replacement of some buildings.

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with, in 2002 there was a wooden part in each corner of the town.

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, now forests in the northwestern and southwestern parts were cut down to make way for a new accommodation zone in the northern corner and a football stadium in the south.

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, the shopping centre above the downtown remained untouched,

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the factory in the east of the city centre was demolished and replaced with a new software company.

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, since the transportation system was enhanced, a new train station was constructed in the west to equip residents with convenient locomotion.

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, the cinema that served the residents for a long time was substituted with a pub.

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The maps below show the city layout of Brisbane between 1975 and the current day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

You use public trasnport and have been facing issues. Write a letter to the public transport autoroties. In your letter include: why public transport is important to you what problem you face suggest what can be done to improve public transport

Some people think that detailed descriptions of crime scenes in newspapers and on TV can have a bad influence on the public, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people used distance- learning programs to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefits as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say zoos are cruelty to wild animals,while others think they can only be protected there.To what extent do you agree?