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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart showed the difference among the amount of
households
 categorized through their
income
 every
year
 are 2007, 2011, and 2015 in the United States.
Overall
, all of
five
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the five
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 types of
households
 took the same number of
households
 from 2007 to 2015, except the one
earned
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that earned
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 $100.000 or more per
year
. In 2007, that one took nearly 29
millions
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million
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 families but it increased
until
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to
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 34
millions
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million
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households
 with
income
 levels $50.000 - $74.999 and $75.000 - $99.999 annual
year
 has hardly changed in all 3 years. Both of them are only
at
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apply
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21 and 14
millions
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million
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 families respectively.
Furthermore
, $75.000 - $99.999 was the classification with the fewest
households
 among all
fives
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five
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income
classification
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classifications
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.
Besides
 that,
although
 the range of
income
 over $100.000 per
year
 declined from 29
millions
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million
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 (in 2007) to 27
millions
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million
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 houses (in 2011), it had an increase in 2015 until 34
millions
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million
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households
.
To conclude
, the amount of
households
 in the 5
income
 categories annually has a quite different distribution.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words households, income, year, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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