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The charts below show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA from 1930 to 2010

The charts below show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA from 1930 to 2010
#show #marriages #divorces #usa
The two bar graphs illustrate the total
number
 of
people
 who were married and divorced in the USA between 1930 and 2010. One notable thing is that the changes
of
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in
show examples
 married and divorced
people
 show similarities over
time
. At the beginning of
this
time
 period, over one million
people
are
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were
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 married and
this
number
 of
people
 increased consistently until 1950. It over doubled in 1950.
Similarly
,
dirvorced
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divorced
people
 experienced an increase from roughly 190,000 to 600,000 between 1930 and 1960.
However
, both married and divorced
people
 started to decline from 1960 and 1970, respectively. It is
also
 easy to notice that the
number
 of marriages and
dirvorces
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divorces
 showed dramatically an increase from 1990.
People
 over 1.5 million married and about 450,000
people
 divorced in 1990.
Moreover
, those figures skyrocketed until the
last
 year of
this
time
 period. In 2010, the
number
 of married
people
were
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was
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 over 3.5
millions
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million
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,
theyby
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thereby
they
 demonstrating an increase of 3.5 times compared to the
beginnig
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beginning
 of the period.
In addition
, the divorced
people
also
remarked
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reached
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new
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a new
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 high at the same
time
, with a figure of over 100,000.
Overall
,
it Is clear that
number
 of married and divorced
people
show
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showed
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remarkabley
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remarkably
remarkable
 similar changes between 1930 and 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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