you are taking a course at a local collage. the deadline for your project was last week but you have not finished it. write a letter to lecturer. introduce yourself explain why you have not handed in the project yet. request more time to do it.

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Dear Ammy, my name is jaspreet kaur.

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am a student of your class in

cosmetology

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the cosmetology

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program.

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am writing

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letter because

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could not submit my

hair cutting

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project

on 28th

april

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which was the deadline for

this

project

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always complete my all assignments and projects on

the

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time but

this

time

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got a fever so

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had to take two days off from

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collage

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college

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due to

which

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was not able to complete

this

project

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am requesting

you

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you

could

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give me some extra time to finish

this

and

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promise it will not happen again in the future.

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hope you will understand my situation and allow me to submit my

project

. thank you, Jaspreet Kaur

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task response

Make sure to capitalize the pronoun 'I' and proper nouns like 'College' to make your writing more formal and polished.

task response

Provide a bit more detail in your explanation about the delay to enhance the completeness of your response.

coherence and cohesion

The logical structure is generally good, but try to connect ideas more seamlessly using transitional phrases for better flow.

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You used an appropriate and polite tone throughout the letter, which is suitable for the context.

coherence and cohesion

Your greeting and closing are correctly formatted and create a respectful tone.

coherence and cohesion

Each paragraph presents a single idea, which helps in maintaining clarity.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

125 words

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you are taking a course at a local collage. the deadline for your project was last week but you have not finished it. write a letter to lecturer. introduce yourself explain why you have not handed in the project yet. request more time to do it.

The Closing

Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Some people think that detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV programs has bad consequence, so this kind of information should be restricted on media. To what extent do you agree?

Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. To what extent do you agree with this?