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Many individuals insist that children should follow their parents' and teachers's rules, on the other hand, the rest of the people believe that giving a safe free space to children to grow will be beneficial to their growth. In my opinion, I am more inclined to believe that children a vulnerable human beings who are still in need of assistance and support from their parents and teachers.
There are many nations that put the young generation’s education a priority, but there are some individuals who think teaching illiterate adults how to understand a word or even write the words should be more important. I partially agree with the statement, and I will elaborate on my view in the following paragraphs.
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How are you? I hope you’ve been well. I’m just writing to give you some information about my apartment, where you can stay as much time as you want to .Well, I’m going to Alberta tomorrow, which means that you’ll need to collect the keys from Mr. Smith. He lives in apartment 36 on the same street and is a good friend of mine. I’ve already told him about you, making it easy for you to meet him and take the keys.
While teenagehood is considered to be more joyful and carefree, some people are of the opinion that adulthood is the happiest time. In my opinion, as teenagers have more free time and no pressure of responsibilities, they should be those who enjoy their lives the most. This essay aims to discuss both views.
