Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or not agree?

While

many believe that some people's successful achievement is somewhat happened by luck, others argue that precise plans and continuity of

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are keys to

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anything

instead

. The reason why I agree with the latter statement will be elaborated on in

this

essay.

To begin

with, it may seem sensible for some to claim that a person

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one

's goal is a result of

one

's fortune.

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is

possibly

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because

that

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their milestone

are

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hindrance

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as if it

impossible

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to make it

for

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the outsider's perspective. Take

Iphone

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iPhone

,

for example

; though it is thought to be

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that their products will

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out win

the other

smartphone's

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brand

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in a competitive

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market share, several

though

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this

could happen

one

in a million.

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, I personally argue in

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of

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seeing that everything

happened

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for a

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. To simply explain, nothing in

this

world would

occured

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occur

occurred

by luck, yet their

thouroughly

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thorough

plans and constant training to pursue their goals are essential factors to make

this

possible.

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, it is widely known by every

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students

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that a

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top rank university

such

as Cambridge

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are

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only reserved for the smartest

one

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, still, plenty of students who are not considered as

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were accepted to the school

due to

their

hardwork

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hard work

toward

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studies. In summary,

although

it is undeniable that some aims might

occurred

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by chance, I am of the opinion

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through detailed plan and hard work in order to make their dreams come true.