The table below gives information about UK independent and Republic of Ireland films by genre 2012.

The table below gives information about UK independent and Republic of Ireland films by genre 2012.
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The provided chart illustrates the data about two types of movies which were delivered between the UK and the Republic of Ireland in 2012.
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, both drama and documentary genres took up the largest quantities more than other films,
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was expended to watch by the audience. Looking at the rate of income from ticket sales, the highest percentage was comedy.
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0.7%.
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, the drama and the documentary recorded the highest and most similar quantities which made up 23.6% of the total releases.
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the second rank was comedy type which it only was lower than both drama and documentary. Moving on to the percentage of income for selling tickets, the comedy sold a significant number of tickets, nearly 45.4% of the total ticket sales and
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the highest revenue.
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, horror films
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gained a lot from the rest of other kinds of movies with more than 20%.
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, the part of the romance
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0.8%.
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