The two maps illustrate the external and internal changes in the design of a health centre that happened from 2005 until the present day
the diagrams present the modifications that have taken place in the health centre between the year 2005 and the present.
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the health centre is enlarged and redesigned. Linking Words
Moreover
, parking lots are expanded Linking Words
while
the garden area is reduced.
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To begin
with, Physiotherapy and office remained in the same position but their size was shrunk. A C3 room was demolished and the entrance was moved from the bottom of the facility to the left side, Linking Words
as well as
, a reception desk which was relocated to the left corner. Linking Words
Furthermore
, children's play areas were Linking Words
also
added near the reception desk and the door. The old CR1 and CR2 rooms were changed into CR4 and CR3, Linking Words
besides
, the old entrance area became the rooms for CR1 and CR2. The new minor operations room was constructed on the top left corner of the building.
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Additionally
, the seats inside the care centre were rearranged Linking Words
while
both old fences which located Linking Words
in
the bottom left and right were repositioned. The number of cars which can park in the car Change preposition
at
parking
increased by 18.Replace the word
park
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