the diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles

the diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles
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The diagram illustrates the process of recycling plastic
bottles
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, the entire process consists of three main stages collecting, transforming into raw material and producing final products.


To begin
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,
bottles
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are taken from the garbage. Once they are collected, they are
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transported to the
center
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where utilized products are recycled,
there
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recyclable
bottles
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are separated from non-recyclable ones.
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bottles
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are compressed into
cubic shaped
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blocks. They are
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crushed into small pieces, after which these pieces are washed and sent to the special machine which produces plastic pellets. Following a period of heating, raw materials are formed for production. In the final stage of the process, various household products are manufactured from the materials.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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