The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The two tables illustrate the comparison between how high the degrees and how long daylight
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London and Sydney from 28th to 30th, December 2018.
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, it can clearly be seen that each of the countries compared has different levels of
temperatures
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and hours of daylight. In general, Sydney has higher
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and longer daylight rather than London throughout the given period. In terms of the weather in London during the
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week in December 2018, the
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started at 4 for the minimum and 9 for the maximum. Both are measured in degrees of Celcius. The next day, the maximum
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increased by 4 before going down to 10.
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, the minimum
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slightly declined to 3
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and
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grew by 2. Meanwhile, for the hours of sunlight, the average time was around 8 a.m. to almost 4 p.m. Regarding the circumstance in Sydney, the typical
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were about 17-19 for the minimum, and 26-31 for the maximum.
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, in
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region during the given time, the sun rose at approximately 05.45 to 05.46.
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, the
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at around 8 p.m.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperatures with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • The tables compare
  • temperatures
  • hours of daylight
  • ranged from
  • consistently high
  • slight increase
  • remained stable
  • significantly fewer
  • enjoyed
  • overall
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