The chart shows the first-year university students and the subject they took by gender in 1980

The chart shows the first-year university students and the subject they took by gender in 1980
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The given bar chart illustrates the number of juniors who majored the 6 diverse fields during 1980.
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, it can be observed that
females
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had more students in subjects than
males
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, with the exception of sciences and maths .
Additionally
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, the biggest disparity between the subjects studied was seen in Languages where the
females
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clearly came out on top. Looking at the figures of the areas that saw noticeable disparities between sexes. As for Medicine, there were around 4000 female students
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males
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accounted for nearly 3000. In terms of Sciences, where
males
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outnumbered
females
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at 4500 against approximately 2000 in that order. Regarding Languages, where the figures for
females
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were far higher than that for
males
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at 4200 and 1500, respectively. In 1980, a lesser number of
males
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at 2000 compared to girls at 4700. Turning towards the 2 remaining fields which saw small differences during 1980. With respect to Maths, it is apparent that boys took slightly more in areas at 3200 than female juniors at 2900. Followed by Law, boys and girls made up a similar number, at roughly 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words females, males with synonyms.
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