The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram below illustrates the differences between a public library 20 years ago and now.
At first glance at the plan, the central tables and chairs were removed, and,
instead
, some sofas were added in the corner. Another noticeable feature, a cafe` was built in the southeast corner, while
the non-fiction books were removed. Also
, the adult non-fiction content is still in the same place, but they are in smaller
area now.
Correct article usage
a smaller
To begin
with, the south-west room usage turned from providing newspapers and magazines to read
into providing computers, and its entrance location has changed. Wrong verb form
reading
Additionally
, the area that was mainly used for video games turned to
be used for storytelling events Change preposition
out to
as well as
for children's fiction books, and it is bigger than before.
Moreover
, there is no enquiry desk now, but there is a lecture area. Besides
that, three self-service machines were added in front of the coffee shop. Finally
, now, all reference books are located between the computer room and the only one that contains sofas.Submitted by haneenalnetaif on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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