The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that in the upcoming years,

humans

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human's

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physical condition should worsen than the present situation. I strongly agree with

this

statement; the usage of junk foods and a lack of exercise would lead them to reduce their health.

Primarly

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Primarily

,

majority

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the majority

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of the sexes like to eat food from outside

than

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rather than

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cooking at home, the food's taste & presentation attracts them to use more hotel foods. But the

incredients

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ingredients

which the

restaurents

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restaurants

restaurant

used

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use

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to make

such

things are very

cheep

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cheap

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and it affects

the

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apply

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good health.

By using

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Using

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such

utilities may lead

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individuals into

cronic deceses

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chronic diseases

.

For Instance

, Boys and girls love to eat chilli

chiken

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chicken

from

foods

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food

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trucks but the content which

create

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creates

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more taste is Ajenomoto,

while

adding

this

chemical

in

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to

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food

create

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creates

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huge

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a huge

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impact

for

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on

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Kidneys.

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to that, Persons

avoids

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avoid

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acitivities

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activities

such

as running, walking and

cyclings

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cycling

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from their

day to

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day-to-day

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day

life. In

this

busy world people

chasing

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chase

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behind other objects which make them happy. They forgot about the feeling that can create from better movements,

deceses

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diseases

like heart attacks and

strocks

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strokes

patients are increasing

day

by

day

due to

lack of exercise.

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,

the

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in the

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study done by

the

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Dublin

university

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University

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in 2023,

the

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apply

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people with

the

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an

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age limit of 40-45

were

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apply

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died

due to

cardiac arrest because of

less

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fewer

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workouts. In conclusion, human beings can improve their life span by consuming quality

suppliments

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supplements

from home and

visits

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visiting

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gyms for workouts.