How do you reuse old towels? Discuss your opinion and reasons behind it

Nowadays, fewer and fewer
people
write
letters
to communicate
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each other. Society considers
this
type of communication outdated, and I am going to describe
this
tendency in
this
essay. Honestly speaking, I think
letters
are too slow and you have to do much more actions to send and
recieve
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receive
the letter in
comparsion
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comparison
with other communication methods. I don't know anyone who still writes
letters
, but I read that some
people
realy
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really
love to send
letters
and postcards from foreign countries to their relatives or to themselves. At first
sight
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sending
letters
to yourself looks strange, but I can understand
people
who want to own some physical evidence of their travel.
People
tend to have real things,
for example
: books, notebooks and
letters
. Those things have real characteristics like
smell
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of paper,
nice
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a nice
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look,
some
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and some
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handwritten words. All those characteristics make you feel
yourself
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cozy
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,
bring
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and bring
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some good memories
about
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past
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the past
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. Despite all that amount of real
letters
is decreasing.
Letters
was
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substituted by emails and today emails
also
become less popular in
favor
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of messengers. Short and fast messaging tools are winning,
people
use smiles and stickers
instead
of handwriting and real pictures,
people
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and people
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like to read and watch short stories, but not
oldstyle
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old style
old-style
walls of text. To summarize,
letters
is
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not the best way to send information
fot
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over
the
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long
distance
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, humanity has a lot of better ways to do it. But writing and
recieving
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receiving
letters
is a very nice way to
surprice
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surprise
your friend or relative and to give a feeling of real, physical presence.
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