The pie charts below show the propotions of visits to Ireland last year by age group, and by gender and type of visit.

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Ireland by age group and by gender and type of visit.

Overall

, it is obviously seen that

the

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year

the highest

percentage

of

visitors

was 45-54

years

and 25-34

years

,

whereas

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was the lowest

percentage

.

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, the figures of males and females who visited leisure classes were more, than business classes. Getting back to the details

last

year

the highest

percentage

of

visitors

was ages

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25 to 54

years

, and accounted

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%,

on the

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the figure

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visiter

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under 15

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was only 6%. The

visitors

16-24

years

made up 9%, compared to

years

between 55-64 was less

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%. The second highest

percentage

was 35-44

years

constituted 19%. The

percentage

of females who visited business class was only 4% and males were 13%. The figures were the lowest

percentage

of

visitors

,

whereas

the highest

percentage

was leisure

visitors

. The

males

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and the

females

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percentage

was

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43% and 40% respectively.