The bar chart shows the percentage of elderly citizens in three countries in 1980, 2000, and 2030

The bar chart shows the percentage of elderly citizens in three countries in 1980, 2000, and 2030
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The provided bar chart illustrates the ratio of those who are 65 years old and above in Canada,
Germany
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, and the UK in three different years
Overall
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, what stands out is that
although
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Canada's numbers were the lowest in 1980, it will be in second place in 2030.
In addition
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, the
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germany
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German
bar outnumbered the others throughout the three years.
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, the
canadian
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Canadian
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statistic was at almost 10 per
cent
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in
first
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year before it rose in 2000 and had an identical number
of
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the UK which is around 15 per
cent
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.
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, the UK bar will be overcome by the Canadian ones in 2030 which will be at approximately 22%. With regards to
Germany
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, the percentage had and will have a massive resurgence between 1980 and 2030. In 1980, the proportion of elderly population was 15 per
cent
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.
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, it had escalated with the
tern
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of the century and reached nearly 20 per
cent
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.
Moreover
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, the
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germany
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Germany
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numbers
expected
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to hit a peak at 25 per
cent
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in 2030.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words germany, cent with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic trends
  • elderly population
  • percentage
  • growth rate
  • projections
  • factors influencing
  • implications
  • comparative analysis
  • social services
  • economy
  • population aging
  • elderly care
  • statistical data
  • historical trends
  • future trends
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