The chart below shows the information about changes in average house proces in five different cities between 1990 and 202 compared with the average house price in 1989

The chart below shows the information about changes in average house proces in five different cities between 1990 and 202 compared with the average house price in 1989
The bar graph presented compares and contrasts the variations in the honw
price
of five distinct countries namely
usa
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USA
spain
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japan
germany
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german
and uk between 1989
to
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till 2002
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it is
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from the chart that the country of
london
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London
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, disbursed
highest
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proportion of interest,
in contrast
to Madriad from the
last
given time frame . To commence with, it is evident, in the
year
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of
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1990 to 1995 , the
percenctile
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percentage
of Tokyo and London was approximately similar with the average home
price
of 0% respectively, followed by, New
york
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as well as
Tokyo , which seemed the slight difference with percentage of _5%. Moving forward, in the
year
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of
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1990 till 1995 , the
price
of of residential area was near about 0.1% , in
case
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of Madraid nations and 0.3% was
being
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observed by Frankfurt country .
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to
this
provision
of
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London was highly interested in the
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years
year
yeasr
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years
of 1996 and 2002 with the average
price
of
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house
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houses
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to around 10% , compared to those , who possessed
the
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a
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portion of
one - fifth
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one-fifth
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in terms of New York with 5%
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