the table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The world has a huge
population
of over 7 billion
humans on Earth. But each country has a different population
. If each human lived inside in
one country, the Earth would barely have any space at all. The top three countries with the highest Change preposition
apply
population
on Earth are China
, India
and USA
. These continents have the highest amount
of people
compare
to any other in the world.
Wrong verb form
compared
Firstly
, we have China
with an amount
of 1.415 billion
. Next
we have Add a comma
Next,
India
with around 1.354 billion
. Lastly
, we have USA
with an Correct article usage
the USA
amount
of 327 million
. China
and India
both have over a billion
humans residing in the country meanwhile USA
barely has 300 million
. India
could however
easily outbeat
Correct your spelling
out beat
outbreak
China
, as it's
residents have had an increase of 1.11% since 2017, unlike Replace the word
its
China
and USA
which have less than a one Correct article usage
the USA
percent
increase. Despite Change the spelling
per cent
this
, India
also
has the least area
available. It has roughly around 455 people
per square
kilometer
, Change the spelling
kilometre
while
only having 2.973 million
square
kilometers
. Change the spelling
kilometres
China
has much more space available despite having the highest amount
of residents currently, with only 151 people
per square
kilometers
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kilometer
while
it has almost 10 million
square
kilometers
. Change the spelling
kilometres
Although
USA
cannot compare with the two above, it has the biggest urban Correct article usage
the USA
population
of 83%. China
only has 58%, while
India
barely has any
32% of Correct quantifier usage
apply
people
in it's
cities.
To summarize the whole table, Replace the word
its
China
has the highest population
of 1.4 billion
but it's
land Correct your spelling
its
area
is able to compensate for it. India
has 1.3 billion
, however
its Add the comma(s)
however,
area
is dense and it's
land Replace the word
its
area
is only 2.9 million
, barely able to compensate for the amount
of citizens residing in it. Despite Change the quantifier
number
USA
only having 327 Correct article usage
the USA
million
, it has a huge land area
, allowing people
to move freely without having to be tightly packed together, and most of USA's
citizens live inside the cities.Correct article usage
the USA's
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