The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000.

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The pie chart illustrates the percentage of changes in annual expenditure by local officials in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000.

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, the biggest proportion of spending was on higher education in all three years,

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the very least amount was allocated to environmental services and others.

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, 35% of total money was spent on higher education services in 1980, which rose to 45% in 1990, but saw a decline in 2000 and the number was 40%. After that comes the K-12 education sector and 25% of expenditure was made in 1980,

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20% of total money was budgeted in 1990 and it was only 18% in 2000. In the transportation field, 16%, 6% and 22% of total money were used to make changes in the years 1980, 1990 and 2000 respectively.

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, the in-charge authority spent 14% on the health and human resources service in 1980, which was 6% higher in 1990 and in 2000 it was 4% less.

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, the expenditure on environmental services was 4%, 5% and 9% respectively, which is much less compared to other fields.

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, in another sector, the percentage witnessed some decrease over the years from 6% to 4% and only 1% remained in the

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given period.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:

allocation of budget
percentage distribution
annual spending
local authorities
sectors
increased funding
decreased funding
trends
socio-economic conditions
policies
expenditure
public services
financial priorities
budgetary adjustments
fiscal policies
discretionary spending
mandatory spending
inflation-adjusted

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