A friend of yours is coming to stay in your house for a week while you are away on holiday. Write a letter to your friend to prepare them for their stay in your letter: -- Give your friend information about the location of your house -- Tell your friend what tasks you would like them to do each day -- Explain what he/she can do and see in your area

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Dear Alexa, I hope

this

letter finds you in great health and you are doing well there. how

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you, girl ? I really miss you long time no

see

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you since finished our studies in

senoir

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senior

high school, I

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can not wait to find you in my house.

Furthermore

along with

this

letter let me give you some information about my house and your tasks during I go on vacation. First of all, I am going to give you

detail

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located my cottage, the specific

maps

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is Rasuna Residence number 11A my house

have

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grey

colour

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. My complex

infront

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in front

of Rinjani apartment

not

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too far from the supermarket.

Secondly

, I will explain your

jobdesk

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job desk

in the morning please give my fish food and

then

you can

trun

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turn

off all lamp include garden lamp if you

not

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feel tired you may swap the floor if you want. My flat has complete

fasilities

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facilities

you can utilize all of kind

fasility

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facility

there. For illustration, you can use gym tools for exercise.

Moreover

, you could

swimming

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to make

fresh

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your body Once again, I would say ocean

thank

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to you for your help in advance, I hope you can enjoy over there. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. yours sincerely, Xiexie.

Submitted by patricius.yohanes on Fri May 17 2024

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grammar

Be sure to check your spelling and grammar to avoid small mistakes like 'senior high school' (instead of 'senoir high school') and 'turn off' (instead of 'trun off').

clarity

Clarify the job tasks with more precision. For instance, specify the frequency of tasks like feeding the fish and turning off the lights each day.

content

You have included all four parts of the task: greeting your friend, providing location information, explaining daily tasks, and suggesting activities in the area.

tone

The tone of the letter is friendly and informal, which is suitable given that you are writing to a close friend.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

212 words

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