A friend of yours is coming to stay in your house for a week while you are away on holiday. Write a letter to your friend to prepare them for their stay in your letter: -- Give your friend information about the location of your house -- Tell your friend what tasks you would like them to do each day -- Explain what he/she can do and see in your area
Dear Alexa,
I hope
this
letter finds you in great health and you are doing well there. how ae
you, girl ? I really miss you long time no Correct your spelling
are
see
you since finished our studies in Wrong verb form
seen
senoir
high school, I Correct your spelling
senior
am
can not wait to find you in my house. Unnecessary verb
apply
Furthermore
, along with
this
letter let me give you some information about my house and your tasks during I go on vacation.
First of all, I am going to give you detail
located my cottage, the specific Fix the agreement mistake
details
maps
is Rasuna Residence number 11A my house Fix the agreement mistake
map
have
grey Verb problem
is
colour
. My complex Change preposition
in colour
infront
of Rinjani apartment Correct your spelling
in front
not
too far from the supermarket.
Add a missing verb
is not
Secondly
, I will explain your jobdesk
in the morning please give my fish food and Correct your spelling
job desk
then
you can trun
off all lamp include garden lamp if you Correct your spelling
turn
not
feel tired you may swap the floor if you want.
My flat has complete Change the verb form
do not
did not
fasilities
you can utilize all of kind Correct your spelling
facilities
fasility
there. For illustration, you can use gym tools for exercise. Correct your spelling
facility
Moreover
, you could swimming
to make Change the verb form
swim
be swimming
fresh
your body
Once again, I would say ocean Correct word choice
apply
thank
to you for your help in advance, I hope you can enjoy over there. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
yours sincerely,
Xiexie.Correct subject-verb agreement
thanks
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grammar
Be sure to check your spelling and grammar to avoid small mistakes like 'senior high school' (instead of 'senoir high school') and 'turn off' (instead of 'trun off').
clarity
Clarify the job tasks with more precision. For instance, specify the frequency of tasks like feeding the fish and turning off the lights each day.
content
You have included all four parts of the task: greeting your friend, providing location information, explaining daily tasks, and suggesting activities in the area.
tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and informal, which is suitable given that you are writing to a close friend.