Many people believe that it is better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are many methods to have
an information
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information
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or
knowledge
by the society or by themselves. Some
people
said that learning in groups could be more beneficial
compare
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to seeking information
knowledge
by
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independently.
However
, I strongly agree that
acquire
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acquiring
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a
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knowledge
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knowledge
in a
group
more
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is more
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effective than individually. There are plenty of positive things that will
people
learn from
group
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the group
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,
such
as
brainstorm
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idea
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ideas
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or
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apply
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sharing information and building
a
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apply
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good
relationship
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relationships
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.
Firstly
, in a team,
people
will share their opinions and talk to all
member
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members
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. By sharing their ideas,
people
will achieve a good result and finish a task easier than by working personally. In a team,
people
also
train their
skill
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skills
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of communication and how to handle and control ego. Different to working individually,
people
will not increase their skills and take longer to do their
assignment
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assignments
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. They only have limited
knowledge
to do their task but they have a flexible time to work.
Therefore
, learning with
group
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a group
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and sharing ideas will help
people
to increase
people’s
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their
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understanding and to do their
job
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jobs
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.
Second,
working in
group
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the group
a group
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more
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is more
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effective
to
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in
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bonding with friends and family than individually.
People
will enjoy and
cheerful
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be cheerful
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when they doing something with
group
member
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members
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. Having a good relationship with
team
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the team
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will make
people
feel comfortable
to
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apply
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doing activities together.
However
, working alone or doing activities
by
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on
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own
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your own
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will make someone feel bored and
also
stress
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stressed
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when they doing a task.
To conclude
,
brainstorm
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brainstorming
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idea
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ideas
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be
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are
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an important thing when
people
learning
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learn
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in a
group
and
also
having a good relationship will increase our energy to do our project in daily life.
Thus
, it is great to claim that a person in
group
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a group
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learns more than alone.
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