The graph shows the amount of money spennt on books in Germany , France , Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The graph provides information about the expenditure on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that Germany started with the highest amount and finished with the same raw. Linking Words
Moreover
, all the countries saw an upward trend throughout the Linking Words
period
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It is clearly seen that Austria spent 30 Use synonyms
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dollars
in 1995. Use synonyms
Then
, they experienced a slight increase between 1995 and 1999. Linking Words
Subsequently
, they stood at 40 Linking Words
million
from 1999 to 2001. After, it skyrocketed to roughly 60 Use synonyms
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and finished at almost 70 Use synonyms
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in 2005. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Italy started with 50 Linking Words
million
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then
it fluctuated throughout the Linking Words
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Finally
, it ended up at approximately 60 Linking Words
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dollars
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In addition
, France spent around 55 Linking Words
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dollars
in 1995. Use synonyms
Then
, it went up steadily throughout the Linking Words
period
and it finished at around 75 Use synonyms
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In contrast
, Germany had begun at 80 Linking Words
million
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for 10 years and reached Replace the word
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million
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dollars
end of the Use synonyms
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