The graph shows the amount of money spennt on books in Germany , France , Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The graph provides information about the expenditure on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that Germany started with the highest amount and finished with the same raw. Moreover
, all the countries saw an upward trend throughout the period
.
It is clearly seen that Austria spent 30 million
dollars
in 1995. Then
, they experienced a slight increase between 1995 and 1999. Subsequently
, they stood at 40 million
from 1999 to 2001. After, it skyrocketed to roughly 60 million
and finished at almost 70 million
in 2005. Moreover
, Italy started with 50 million
at the beginning of the period
and then
it fluctuated throughout the period
. Finally
, it ended up at approximately 60 million
dollars
.
In addition
, France spent around 55 million
dollars
in 1995. Then
, it went up steadily throughout the period
and it finished at around 75 million
. In contrast
, Germany had begun at 80 million
and witnessed a fluctuate
for 10 years and reached Replace the word
fluctuation
at
95 Change preposition
apply
million
dollars
end of the period
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