The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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The two maps describe information about the change of an

island

after the appearance of some tourist companies.

Overall

, the

island

has undergone a significant alteration in the recorded period. In the past, it was completely a primitive

island

surrounded by sea. There are only some trees and a beach on the

island

. After the development of tourism, the trees are not destroyed, even though they are planted more in their place near residences. There are lots of accommodations, which are built on the west side and east

side

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sides

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of the

island

. Houses are linked

each

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apply

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together by

footpath

Correct article usage

a footpath

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and there is a

foot way

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footway

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that leads to the beach. The beach can be found on the west of the

island

and it is advanced to serve for swimming activities. The

center

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centre

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of the

island

is reception, which is located between two housing areas.

Restaurant

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The restaurant

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is constructed north of

reception

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the reception

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and it is near the sea bank.

Vehicle

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A vehicle

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track is made to connect several places on the

island

including

restaurant

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a restaurant

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, reception, accommodation and pier.

Pier

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The pier

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is an expansion part

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the sea, it

also

is a place for boats to anchor.

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Clear and correct grammar

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