The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The two maps describe information about the change of an
island
after the appearance of some tourist companies.
Overall
, the
island
has undergone a significant alteration in the recorded period. In the past, it was completely a primitive
island
surrounded by sea. There are only some trees and a beach on the
island
. After the development of tourism, the trees are not destroyed, even though they are planted more in their place near residences. There are lots of accommodations, which are built on the west side and east
side
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sides
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of the
island
. Houses are linked
each
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apply
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together by
footpath
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a footpath
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and there is a
foot way
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footway
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that leads to the beach. The beach can be found on the west of the
island
and it is advanced to serve for swimming activities. The
center
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centre
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of the
island
is reception, which is located between two housing areas.
Restaurant
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The restaurant
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is constructed north of
reception
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the reception
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and it is near the sea bank.
Vehicle
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A vehicle
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track is made to connect several places on the
island
including
restaurant
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a restaurant
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, reception, accommodation and pier.
Pier
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The pier
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is an expansion part
on
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of
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the sea, it
also
is a place for boats to anchor.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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