Task 1 - the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the
number
of closed shops
and new shops
which opened in one country over the period
(2011 to 2018).
As it
can be seen, the Correct pronoun usage
apply
number
of closing and opening shops
has been fluctuated over the given period
, as well as
the quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
shops
that opened and closed dropped dramatically in the middle of period
.
To commence with the Add an article
the period
number
of market closures, it illustrates that it reached the
peak of 8500 in Correct article usage
a
first
year of the given Change the article
the first
period
. Later on, the quantity is
Unnecessary verb
apply
a
Correct article usage
apply
gradual
Change the word
gradually
fluctuate
before it remained stable from 2015 to 2017. From 2017 to 2018, the Wrong verb form
fluctuated
closed
Correct quantifier usage
number of closed
shops
decreased slightly at
3000.
Change preposition
to
On the other hand
, new shops
started to open with more than 6000 shops
in 2011. Opened shops
has
Change the verb form
have
same
trend Change the article
the same
of
the closed Change preposition
as
shops
which were
fluctuated. In 2015, the Unnecessary verb
apply
number
of operated shops
fell suddenly to less than 1000. From 2016, opened
Correct article usage
the opened
shops
increased considerably before leveled
off approximately at 5000.Wrong verb form
levelling
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 3 times.
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