There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In contemporary times,

globalisation

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has benefited the

world

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by accumulating

people

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,

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business

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businesses

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and

nations

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.

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a few

people

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are not satisfied

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change and are standing in the way of progress.

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agree

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statement. It will discuss how

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businesses

are benefited

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with

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from

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the

help

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of

globalisation

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Followed by

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that, it will discuss how it

is contributing

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in

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developing and gathering

people

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or

nations

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together.

Globalisation

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is playing a major role

on

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bringing the

businessess

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businesses

together. With the

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this

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the majority of the organizations are

prevaded

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provided

pervaded

throughout the

world

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scenario will be

McDonals

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McDonalds

, the fast food chain.

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restaurant was opened in 1989 in Texas.

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started its first franchise shop in 1991,

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with the

help

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for

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a few

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business men

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businessmen

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it

spreaded

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spread

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all over the United

Stated

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restaurant is all around the

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both the countries' economy

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the global economy. The contribution of

globalisation

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is not only benefiting

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but

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helpful in bringing

people

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and

nations

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together. The majority of

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Multinational Organizations are bringing their employees from one place to another. The recent survey illustrates that

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almost all the countries were profitted with the

help

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of

globalisation

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contributing

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saving the life of a lot of

people

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situation would be the COVID-19

pandamic

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pandemic

. During that time, all the countries came together

on finding

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a vaccine. Once we found that, the vaccine had been sent to each and every part of the

world

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globalisation

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is contributing a lot in not only bringing

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people

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business

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businesses

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and

nations

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together but

also

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it is helpful in

combaining

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combining

combating

the whole

world

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.