You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart gives
the
information on Correct article usage
apply
Australian's
employment situation Correct your spelling
Australia's
last
year. The data is broken down into different genders and job
types
. Overall
, men
dominant
the employment in majority Replace the word
dominated
job
Change preposition
of job
types
while
more women
were employed in clerical and professionals
jobs.
It is evident when looking at the bar chart that Change the noun form
professional
men
in Australia had greater job
opportunities than women
. Out of seven job
types
, five jobs hired more men
than women
last
year. In tradespeople
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the tradespeople
sector
, the highest number of Australian men
were employed, at 900,000, 8 times more than women
workforce. At the same time, the number of Correct article usage
the women
men
worked
in Wrong verb form
working
production
and managers Correct article usage
the production
sector
Fix the agreement mistake
sectors
were
4.5 and 2 times, respectively, more than Correct subject-verb agreement
was
women
. Others
sectors, Correct your spelling
In other
such
as semi-professionals and labourers, women
's employment was only one-third of men
's. Interestingly, the sector
with Add an article
the second
second largest
amount of male workforce (almost 900,000), the clerical Add a hyphen
second-largest
sector
, had more women
working than men
.
The statistic shows that there were less
Australian Correct quantifier usage
fewer
women
working in the majority of job
types
, with no more than 400,000 female workforce. However
, in professionals
and clerical Correct article usage
the professionals
sector
, the chances of hiring female
were over Fix the agreement mistake
females
male's
, with approximately 100,000 (the former) and 50,000 (the latter) more Change noun form
males
women
were
hired than Unnecessary verb
apply
men
in these areas.Submitted by puimei822 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words job, types, men, women, sector with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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