You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The maps illustrate the development of Westley in two hundred years.
Overall
, the living standard in this
area
has improved since more facilities has
been built since 1815. In 1815, Wesley was a residential Change the verb form
have
area
with not much of facilities.
The majority of south
side was felids and houses Add an article
the south
whereas
the woods, a church, Lord Wesley’s house and more housing to the north. Regarding to
the transportation system, there was only one major road from Tinton village, Remove the preposition
apply
half way
through Westley, and ended in the fields. Correct your spelling
halfway
Moreover
, if people wanted to visit Wesley from London, the only way was going through the Twine Toll Bridge by car.
Nowadays, Wesley has changed a lot and becomes
more developed. Wrong verb form
has become
The most
of the buildings have changed but the town hall and market square are still the same. There are more housings built. The woods have been cut down and replaced by a new housing estate. Correct article usage
Most
Moreover
, a business and residential area
has been built next to the Town Hall. The Lord Westley’s House has replaced
by The Red Lion and Lenton Hotel. The Coach Inn has been demolished and turned into a sports Add a missing verb
been replaced
center
and museum. A West Gate shopping Change the spelling
centre
center
is opened Change the spelling
centre
at
where the church used to be. In terms of transportation, a railroad system has been built and the road has been extended to the southernmost of the city where currently is a new shopping, business and residential Change preposition
apply
area
.
The city has become more convenience
with only one drawback of lacking greens since all the fields and woods Replace the word
convenient
has be
removed.Wrong verb form
have been
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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