The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides data on
number
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of people living in poverty from each household type in Australia in 1999. The information was categorized into six categories
according to
family type.
Overall
, the highest
percentage
of people who lived in poverty belongs to sole parents,
whereas
the biggest account of residents
have
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couples with
children
. Meanwhile, aged couples have the lowest
percentage
compared to other groups.
According to
the table, sole parents and singles with no
children
scored the biggest
percentage
at 19% and 21% respectively.
However
, as a group with
highest
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the highest
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number of people, it dominated above
others
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other
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couples with
children
at 12%(933,000).
On the other hand
, a relatively low
percentage
was among 3 family types (single aged person, aged couple, and couple with no
children
) from 4% to 7% minor.
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