You are living in an English speaking country and the restaurant near you is making a lot of noise. Write a letter to the restaurant owner. Cover the following: - tell restaurant owner to reduce the noise levels. - suggest a solution to fix the problem. - warn that if this problem remains not solved then further action will be taken.
Dear
Restaurant
Owner,
I am Ram, your neighbour living across Harris Street. Since last
month, we frequently hear uncontrolled noise
coming from your restaurant
, especially in the night time. Hence
, I am writing this
letter to request your management to reduce the noise
moving forward.
As you are aware, your shop is located in a residential area and most houses in our vicinity have children and elderly in their homes. Hence
, any sound disturbance from the nearby shops might affect these folks' health. Last
Sunday, there was a party event that occurred in your restaurant
and the music played during that eve was higher than the allowed decibel levels in our area. My child started crying on hearing the noise
and we spent a lot of time pacifying her. I am aware that music is part of the restaurant
business and hence
, I suggest you install sound dampeners on your shop's wall that can reduce the noise
level and avoid any kind of loud music after 8PM in
Change preposition
at
the
night.
I hope you will take the above recommendations to fix the problem. Correct article usage
apply
However
, if I hear such
incidents again, I will register a complaint against your shop in the nearby station. Hoping for cooperation from you on this
.
Yours faithfully
RamSubmitted by nusramkumar on
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coherence
While the letter is well-structured overall, try to ensure each paragraph conveys a single idea or theme for better clarity.
cohesion
It might be helpful to use more transitional phrases to smoothly guide the reader from one point to another.
cohesion
Your letter is well-structured and coherent, with a clear beginning, middle, and end.
task achievement
You have addressed all the task requirements effectively, making a clear request, offering a solution, and providing a warning.
task achievement
Your tone is polite yet firm, making your concerns clear without being confrontational.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite