The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.
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The given table chart illustrates the proportion of consumption in each product
group
and in each
time
group
. The general overview here is that, over the period, From 5.30 to 8.30, the Latte was the most popular order,
While
, from 7.30 to 10.30, Sandwiches were the
last
command.
According to
the data, in each
time
group
between 7.30 and 10.30 of Latte, it was important to first note that, the number of brew cuppas was elite at 265 requice,
as well as
, that on 5.30 to 8.30, there was a command at 200
cups
, and on 10.30 to 2.30 and 2.30 to 5.30, there were directives at 185
cups
and 145 cappuccino. In the period from 7.30 a.m. to 8.30 pm, the total was 795
cups
per day.
Additionally
, the rate of tea was the most popular at 7.30 to 10.30 at 110
cups
,
while
at 2.30 to 5.30, 10.30 to 2.30, and 5.30 to 8.30, there were requests at 35, 50, and 75
cups
, respectively, for a total of 270
cups
of tea per day. Another reason is the ratio of pastries and the peak decree on 7.30 to 10.30, 2.30 to 5.30, 10.30 to 2.30, and 5.30 to 8.30 at 275, 150, 95, and 80 of each piece and
time
, The total was 600 pieces per day. the proportion of sandwiches in high order at 10.30 to 2.30, 5.30 to 8.30, 7.30 to 10.30 and 2.30 to 5.30 at 200,110,50,40 in each
time
group
, the total, there were 400 pieces each
time
.
Furthermore
, the products ordered by customers in each
time
group
were 7.30 to 10.30, 10.30 to 2.30, 5.30 to 8.30 and 2.30 to 5.30, the total
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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700,530, 465 and 370 each Request.
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